I don't know much about either of you for real. All I really know is that MC-OG is Gas' brother, and Spawn came into the Clabtrap thread talking about how lucky we were that WS didn't enter the comp and there were only like 2 people who could hang with him.
I got pissed and had a little shit talk fest with Spawn, and that was that. Then I see him in the HDC facebook page and he seems like an alright guy, so maybe he was just trolling, idk. But anyway this is pretty much my first time hearing both of you, so here goes.
MC-OG: You had great lyrics and your flow was pretty good too. The emo lines were kinda funny, but WS said he didn't do emo rap so ONE OF YOU IS A LYING ASS LIAR.
My criticism would be that you kinda sounded like you weren't very confident. If you delivered that with a little more vocal command, it could have been real nice. Good job though man; I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.
Spawn: You had a better mic presence and I liked your responses to OG's verses. The Hank Hill line was good, but you took too long of a breath, making the delivery a little off beat. Which brings me to my only real criticism.
You should work on that mic-breathing, because it's a little distracting and makes the end product have less impact than it should.
I'm gonna vote for War Spawn because he seemed more polished, had equally strong lyrics, and really effective flips. The audible breathing was a bit distracting, but he can fix that with practice.
If MC-OG had equal mic presence as WS, this would have been a tie for me.
Great battle fellas.