Damn Butsaay, you covered everything I was gonna say in your review.
Okay, basically, this was Star69's first battle, and I think he did a damn fine job- ESPECIALLY not knowing what the general rules of thumb for Newgrounds battling are. He joined HDC and NG yesterday, and completed his first battle within hours of joining. Dude has impressive delivery, lyrics and voice, and I think he has a bright future up here. Once he gets to know the people in HDC and Newgrounds, he'll be bringing the personals I'm sure.
Masochist is improving by the day. He came with more personals and had some good punches, plus his flow is on point. However, like Butsaay said, he's gotta work on that voice. It is still monotonous and not very exciting. Once he gets the emotion in there he will be a force to be reckoned with. Also, those last bars should have been redone. Masochist was running out of breath and it really hurt him there.
I like both of you guys, and I consider Masochist a friend nowadays, but I gotta give this to Star69. He has better delivery and seems to have found his rap voice. The lack of personals took some points off for me, but he still brought enough to the table to win this in my opinion. This battle was close as fuck. Good job to both of you.