This isn't hip hop nor does this resemble trap at all,
This is sorta more like some Mortal Kombat on Adderal.
Sweet! This is a fun lil whipperdinger to listen to! And since I'm basically a complete production noob all I can really say is great work!
Aight den stay black
Thanks for review, and if not your review, i will probably never realize that it got frontpaged! 8)
You've BEEN dope af for years now S-Rock; just so you know...
Imma put a hook and a few bars on this tonight and HDC is taking it from there. Hope we can do this beat some justice homie
Thanks dude. I don't think I could ever truly quit making music. It's too connected to my soul: I have to share and/or/try to inspire conclusion.
First of all- nice drop. It's relaxing and becomes gangsterish near the end... it was a nicely executed, subtle yet effective and smooth transition. Anywayyyy... SECONDLY...
I was (still am) checking for beats to go on FOR A FREAKING SONG DIRECTLY INSPIRED BY THAT OPPENHEIMER SPEECH YOU OPEN THIS TRACK WITH! How coincidental is that?
Seriously, on a scale of 1 - 67,000,004 how coincidental is that? Anyway haha that shit might drop in the next few days, but I liked listening to this while writing this review. Cool zone-out vibeness
That is highly coincidental. ^_^
Really liking how the bass meshes with the thing and the skuttiness!
MUST rap on this one now; haaaaa fuck dude we're about to be a 2 man band I think. Would love a 3+ minute.wav of this brutha, but either way awesome work man
SAY SOMETHING, YA SPEECHLESS BASTARDS
I don't like giving critical reviews ever really, because I personally just feel like a dick head telling someone they gotta do this and do that when:
a.) I am fairly noobish at mastering my own shit,
b.) I have this weird personality quirk/defect/flaw where I feel like I HAVE to make sure I'm in the good graces of everyone in the world always... lol so I avoid giving negative reviews for that reason too. I hate when someone doesn't like me lol...
But you asked me to let you know what I thought of this one, so I will leave an honest review... *and also I don't take you for a person too sensitive to a little criticism; I'm sure you can handle and probably actually encourage it sometimes. And so do I honestly. I think maybe my problem is when people bring up issues I'm aware of, or are out of my control, or intentionally done by me. But yo- the song...
I listened to it and I'm overall not really diggin' it. But it's not BAD by any means.
What I'm saying I guess- is that it feels like 2 different (good) songs to me. Fused together.
I love the theme, beat and lyrical content btw, but the starkly contrasting vocal styles clash a little too much in my opinion. And now I feel like an ass, lol. But yeah I think this is potentially the prototype for 2 good songs dealing with a similar theme.
4.5 stars but possibly TEN stars in the future??? Alright, hope all is well homeslice!
I get what you mean. Actually, seriously appreciate the critique, especially on the vocals. Helps me keep in mind what works and what doesn't!
Been a busy day today RL. Just now popping in to check on NG
Damn Doc- don't take this the wrong way- but you got an assload better in your time away. Imma download and bump this. Kinda crazy for real dude, after hearing your words on this song I realize that the in last couple years- our paths apparently have a few similarities.
You may or may not be aware, but I took a 2+ year hiatusmyself. I also became a father (my little girl turns 2 next week and she is my world, as I'm sure you feel about your munchkin)... AND I'm not too keen on the details... but I'm pretty sure we're both PTSD-level traumatized by life. This is a dope ass song homie- SO glad to see you back!
This. This right here. Hearing these things- this is what always keeps bringing me back. I really appreciate that, man. It hits me right where it matters. Not only am I hearing a talented high-quality rapper telling me I've improved a LOT- I'm also hearing that I'm writing relatable tracks. Seriously, man. Thanks for this detailed review.
Congrats on your 2 year old! I'm just about to head into the terrible 2's myself lol.
Okay I think this is pretty much awesome. Almost took the words right out of my mouth when it comes to being unappreciated by those you love, but anyway I suck at critical reviews so I'll just leave it at that. Great anti-Vday track; you keeelt it!
Thanks Teq. You are the king of this type verse though, no disrespect since that can sound like an anti-compliment. If you want this beat lmk :)
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